What a fantastic idea. I hope you are going to make this so we can see it on. Sometimes you just can't get the instructions in the bottom corner. Your link for them should be enough if someone needs to see them. I think your description of how the corset is meant to fit helps people visualize it, and that's what is important.
It was great to see this in the contest - so totally unique!! And very clever and nicely done. I loved the details in your description - so interesting and helpful. (When you say "to singe in your waste" I think it should be "to cinch in your waist" - though "cinch" is quite an old fashioned word so there might be a better one to use). A trick I learned from the last Cut and Sew contest is that if you put the instructions at the left hand bottom corner then they can be read when people look at a swatch view.